Misjudgement - Lost - Charlie/Sawyer/Sayid

[toestastegood]

Title: Misjudgement
Pairing: Charlie/Sawyer/Sayid
Word Count: 3050
Rating: PG-13
A/N: Established relationship. Written for Queen zelda_zee, who requested Sayid and threesomes. Also using one of writing_rainbow's prompts.
Summary: When Charlie shows signs of drug use again, Sawyer and Sayid take action. It doesn't go down well.

Comments

[zelda_zee]

Oh, how great! I'm so pleased you wrote a threesome fic! I love this bit of relationship drama between three of my favorite guys. They're just brilliant together, and I love how you manage to show what each of them brings to the dynamic as well as what each of them gets out of this non-traditional relationship.

I liked how Sayid is so brave in other respects, but is deeply afraid when it comes to relationships. That rings true to me. But despite that fear, he still doesn't back down and is determined to do what he has to even if he's afraid.

And Sawyer, seeming not care but actually caring deeply. That's quite lovely. I loved him watching the movie and apparently not paying attention to Charlie's fidgeting but actually not missing a thing. That's so Sawyer!

And of course Charlie's outrage and obstinacy is perfectly IC, as is his secrecy. Old habits die hard.

Thanks so much for this. I love it! ♥

[babydazzle]

[jaydblu]

Aw, Charlie! He's so perfectly Charlie in this. I really like the way you portrayed their domestic life in this, it was totally true to all their characters.

[cielo_claro]

Aww, I never read threesome fic but I'm glad I read this. <3 I wouldn't have thought of the three of them together, but now I'm in love with the dynamic. Really well done!

[haldoor]

Shona, this is gorgeous! You've really captured each of them well and made them a believable threesome. I second all that zelda_zee says too!

You may just want to check your spacings, if you don't mind me pointing it out; a few words run together, especially ones just before Sayid's name.

Lovely stuff! *hugs*