It Started With Your Hips

Apr 18, 2011 00:15

Title: It Started With Your Hips
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Genre: PWP, Drabble
Rating: R
Summary: There are moments when Jonghyun worries about his leg, about new lyrics and the comeback and what the tabloids say, and then there are moments when Kibum just smirks that smirk of his and Jonghyun sort of forgets how to breathe (and it's not that it's new ( Read more... )

f: shinee, p: jonghyun/key, !standalone

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x_saru_x April 17 2011, 21:17:22 UTC
spot for honey_x_flavor, whose absence is heartbreaking. u_u ♥

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honeyflavor April 19 2011, 15:47:41 UTC
sobs I'm not even in a jongkey mood rn but this was good ♥

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x_saru_x April 20 2011, 21:20:44 UTC
How can you ever not be in a jongkey mood sodifnds. But thank you, thank you ♥

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jinkibumiminho April 17 2011, 23:12:53 UTC
"And, at some point, they become this mess that can't be told apart..."

I really liked this.

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x_saru_x April 18 2011, 07:40:16 UTC
I'm really glad to hear that ♥
Thank you for reading!

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vardagaladhiel April 18 2011, 00:11:28 UTC
This is gorgeous! The emotions in this are amazing, I love your subtlety and all the things that you leave unsaid but are still clearly audible.

And, at some point, they become this mess that can't be told apart, and Jonghyun can't define where he ends and where Kibum begins This is beautiful. So much emotion in so few words!

One tiny nit-picky point here: 'wetness sipping through the fabric of his tee', I think you meant 'seeping' instead of 'sipping'?

I loved this, I'm off to go and read some more of your fics now!

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x_saru_x April 18 2011, 07:44:11 UTC
You almost had me blushing with this comment. I'm really happy you'd say all that! ♥

And yep, slipped there! Fixing it now~

Thank you so much, I hope you enjoy the others :3

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shineeowner April 18 2011, 10:02:57 UTC
I loved it :D

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x_saru_x April 18 2011, 20:33:51 UTC
\o/! Thank you for reading~ :3

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jcqlnmarcos April 18 2011, 10:21:10 UTC
"You just want me so much,"

"I do,"

incoherent. brain is made of mush. crap, how I miss them.

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x_saru_x April 18 2011, 20:36:20 UTC
O: Can I help out in any way? hahah but yeah, I get pretty nostalgic over them, too, at times ;_;

Thank you for reading ♥

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jcqlnmarcos April 19 2011, 14:01:03 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥ no need to thank me, I just want more jongkey ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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