“You are ill at ease. The nethicite troubles you.”
And it chilled her that he seemed startled. Did he not know? Two years was a consequent enough amount of time for a hume. Surely he was used to her being able to read him. Just as she was used to his clumsier attempts at reading her in return. Or perhaps this was something
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Oh Lord how will I survive the anticipation of another chapter? Not to mention the nagging feeling of dread that this will eventually come to an end? 11 of 19? Why do you punish me so?
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Wait until number 19 rolls around, maybe you'll *want* the story to be finished by that time, lol.
But seriously, I'm honoured you found this so moving :)
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Anyway, I loved this chapter, I loved how Fran wants someone to be THERE, someone who can make her choice worth it, and the only one who comes close... isn't being the person she quite needs him to be at the one moment she needs him. He's trying, I'm sure, but... his mind is on the nethicite. Maybe he's more like Cid than he'd like to admit...
Wow, sorry, I've just been ranting on and on. It was such a fantastic chapter though, there's so much that I can say... I'll settle for saying good job, and get the next one up soonish! =D
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But yes, I need to stop ranting too. Thanks for reading!
(and I try to get the chapters up once every 2-3 days; the story's already finished, I just don't want to flood the system too much, lol)
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And ok, I guess I see where you're coming from about not overloading the system... That and it keeps us happily anticipating the next chapters, neh? Do you plan on writing more after it's finished?
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And yes, it does keep some suspense not to post everything at once :p
I was actually planning on taking a stab at Basch/Ashe after I'm done with this. Other than that, I've got a few other stories lying around, but since they're not FFXII-related, I guess they'll just go up on my fanfiction.net account.
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I'm glad that Fran comes out well :D
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