Fanfic - The Return - Epilogue (DC Movieverse / West Wing / NCIS / Bones)

[ffutures]

Multiple crossover, NCIS / West Wing / DC comics (movieverse) / Bones.

Previous parts are archived here

Comments

[booster17]

You're using a couple of 'Clark's coming to pick Kara up at the end, thus implying it's Clark Kent, which would reveal that particular secret id. Would 'Superman' be better there?

Otherwise, love it. This has been one of your best stories so far, and I've throughly enjoyed every part.

[ffutures]

It's Kara's POV but I see what you mean. I'll change it.

[draconin]

Interesting. Considering earlier discussions, I was half expecting Kara to take advantage of her momentary non-Super self to get pregnant with Tim, since she'd clearly find it hard later when her powers came back and since, with the AI gone, the opportunity probably wouldn't come again. *g*

[ffutures]

For the purposes of this story the AI was stretching the truth about that.

[gonzo21]

Good stuff.

[ffutures]

Thanks - had a lot of fun with it. Couldn't get the "Ziva and Abby take down the Joker" scene to work, unfortunately.

[curiouswombat]

Works for me! Which is really good, considering that I don't watch NCIS.

[ffutures]

Tim is actually a little old for Kara, but never mind. Glad you enjoyed it.

[sirernest]

"[...]Many of the sets can be combined for more complicated projects.[...]"

I think you should replace the "complicated" with "complex"

As it stands it sounds a bit discouraging.

[ffutures]

Thanks - good one!