Fanfic - The Return - XV (DC Movieverse / West Wing / NCIS / Bones)

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Multiple crossover, NCIS / West Wing / DC comics (movieverse) / Bones.

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Comments

[learnedhand_dj]

I've been enjoying this series. Well constructed plot, and the crossovers don't feel forced.

One possible correction: if you are thinking that Kara should be speaking American English, she would not say "I'm going to discuss it with Lois and Clark at the weekend." She'd probably say "I'm going to discuss it with Lois and Clark this weekend."

Of course, "at the weekend" might not be an English phrase, and you might have just meant "at my party this weekend" or something like that. Either way, "at the weekend" wouldn't work for an American English speaker.

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Thanks!

[draconin]

A very convincing villain and not one that I spotted in advance. Huzzah!

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Good - I was hoping people wouldn't catch on before chapter 13 or so.

[pengshui_master]

Did the bomb detonate early . Eg a 1:00 rather than 0:00 ?

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No. I should make it clearer, it's a little "joke" by the designers of the bomb in response to way too many James Bond "stop the clock at 007 seconds" scenes.

[curiouswombat]

I really like the idea of a bomb that goes off at 001.00.

I really liked the rest of the chapter too.

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Thanks!

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I should mention that apparently the idea isn't original with me - it's on the Evil Overlord list.

[redrikki]

Interesting mix of shows to crossover, but somehow it ended up working incredibly well. Cool and unexpected villain and a lot of fun over all.

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Thanks!