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ffutures

The Key To Byzantium - XVI

Sep 30, 2006 09:30

Wrote a little more of my BtVS / Stargate SG-1 crossover last night while I was waiting to meet some friends - it's not as long as my usual chapters, but I think it holds together fairly well.

Previous parts are here

( The Key To Byzantium - XVI )

fanfic, btvs, stargate

Comments 7

basilio_the_cat September 30 2006, 10:09:26 UTC

Was that Illyria? I haven't seen Angel past season 2, but I've heard bits of descriptions about her.

Great chapter :D

ffutures September 30 2006, 10:38:08 UTC

Yep, that's Illyria

speakr2customrs September 30 2006, 10:28:51 UTC

Very interesting...

4thdixiechick September 30 2006, 11:48:28 UTC

Cool update! Can't wait to find out where Illyria took Daniel.

I did notice one thing-you need a new paragraph for the new speaker here:

"Well spotted, Sherlock." The woman, if that was what she was, twisted her head at an odd angle then leapt back aboard the tel'tak, covering ten yards or so in a single bound. "Nimble little minx, isn't she?"

ffutures September 30 2006, 15:18:52 UTC

That was Jack again, quoting Ghostbusters, but I'll see if I can make it clearer.

4thdixiechick September 30 2006, 15:36:23 UTC

That was Jack again, quoting Ghostbusters, but I'll see if I can make it clearer.

D'Oh! [slaps forhead]

I didn't realize it was Jack speaking both times. (In my defense, I hadn't had my morning coffee yet).

remey September 30 2006, 14:47:50 UTC

very kick ass :D