Fanfic - BtVS / Marvel Cinematic Universe - London Calling 5/5

[ffutures]

The collapse of SHIELD leads to the release of a dangerous wizard, and problems in London for Buffy, Thor, and their friends.

Part V - the aftermath...

Comments

[whswhs]

You've got a minor typo: During Ethan's invocation, you have the words "where one there had been a tattoo," which I think should be "where once there had been a tattoo."

It seems that you're crossing the Marvel Cinematic Universe continuity over either with the X-men films or with the comics universe, as my understanding is that the MCU has no mutants. I assume that's intentional?

I'm sorry not to see Buffy meeting Steve Rogers; that would be an interesting encounter. Perhaps we can see it in some future story?

On Vi and the hammer, as I recall the exact wording is "if he be worthy." So that implies that Vi is worthy in a way the other slayers aren't-just as Beta Ray Bill was worthy long ago. That seems like another potential plothook. . . .

Obviously this one isn't the end of the arc! I look forward to the next one.

[ffutures]

There may be more - starting with a little Avengers compare their Blue Peter badges story...

Thanks for the typo!

And yes, as far as I'm concerned the MCU has mutants - the current division into different franchises is an abomination!

[jeymien]

I really enjoyed this :) I just have one nitpick as a World of Warcraft player - there's hundreds, thousands of guilds.. asking what Guild wouldn't be what most WoW players say to each other when they meet - It'd be either what faction - followed by a For the Horde! or For The Alliance depending on which they were... or what server. Usually the what server cause that's how you'd be able to play together :)

[ffutures]

Thanks, I'll change it.

[jeymien]

You're welcome! Glad to be of any sort of help.