Fanfiction, Round 1!

[ffjunkie42]

An FFX fanfic, Isaaru-centric. I don't know how it went, it's the first FFX fanfic that isn't one of the main 7's POV.

Title: And Shut the Gates of Mercy on Mankind
Author: ffjunkie42/sagdragon3002
Fandom: Final Fantasy X; Isaaru-centric, Yuna, Maroda, and Pacce cameos
Rating/Warning: K+, Spoilers for end of FFX

Comments

[auronlu]

A-HA.

You post on LJ as well.
Suggestion #1: Turn linebreaks in the above post into linebreaks.
Suggestion #2: You write well. See the FAQ on ff_press! If you add a quick header to your posts -- title, which final fantasy, characters, rating, I think it is -- and drop them a note/link when you post a new story, they will add it to the next day's listing of freshly-posted fanfic, and lo, you will get a few more readers!

Several of us even leave comments, comma, dammit, which is half the fun, yes? And concrit.

And, er, hi. I'm sorry my feedback tonight is incoherent: long day, brain is cheese, and an hour of FFIX seems to have made the problem worse. But I liked this piece and will be stalking your ffx writing in future, la! Huzzah for literary allusions.

[ffjunkie42]

*headdesk* Thank you very much for pointing out the linebreak issue; I knew I was forgetting something when I was going through and formatting it.

Also, thank you for the concrit and the kudos. It's always nice to know the readers take some pleasure in what I write. I don't know when I'll get around to the community you included above, but I may take you up on your suggestion soon.

It's always nice to get feedback, incoherent or not. And, interestingly enough, I am playing through FFIX now as well, so I understand the mushed brain ^.~

[auronlu]

Speaking of incohererent, I was trying to say, "turn linebreaks in the above post into paragraph breaks." Good grods, and I'm trying to proofread/post one more chapter before bed? *shakes head*