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Rivalry - FFX; Donna/Yuna

Aug 28, 2010 20:10

Title: Rivalry
Fandom: FFX
Pairing: Dona/Yuna (probably one-sided on Donna's part, though she would never voice it.)
Prompts: NPCs
Rating: PG
Word Count: 100
Spoilers?: Yes, if you don't know what what the summoner's sacrifice entails.
( Oh, it's Donna! )

pairing: dona/yuna, author: girlinstilettos, fandom: ffx, prompt: npcs

Comments 5

thunderousmoon August 29 2010, 16:27:57 UTC

oooh, I absolutely love this :D
I thought Donna was an annoying so and so in the game too but your drabble kind of makes me like her (somewhat ;P).
Lovely and has the air of regret that I often enjoy.

auronlu August 30 2010, 02:30:57 UTC

Ouch!

Yes, I definitely didn't like Dona the first few times through. Oddly, X-2 gives a lot of insight into her character and improves her while making poor Isaaru into a twit!

As for the drabble, when I saw Dona/Yuna I had to pounce. And I think you've captured Dona perfectly.

girlinstilettos August 30 2010, 16:24:08 UTC

Oh no, am I total idiot? Did I spell the name wrong? Is it Dona not Donna? *facepalm*

sissyhiyah August 31 2010, 02:38:55 UTC

Am I the only one that liked Dona? Aww. I thought she was fun, kind of like the summoner Judy Blume would write if she did Final Fantasy. You know, a little bitchy, a little bossy, a little desperate, a little pushy, mean to her boy-toy, long, long legs...

Er...

Ahem.

Anyway! Interesting take on our not-so-nice summoner. I really liked imagining her in JUST this way.

rosehiptea August 31 2010, 12:11:14 UTC

Dona wasn't exactly my favorite character (I think it was the outfit, though that's rather shallow of me) but I like the emotions you show her having here.