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Beauty - Krile / Lenna (FFV)

Jun 29, 2009 10:33

Title: Beauty
Fandom: FFV
Pairing: Krile / Lenna
Prompt: Silence
Rating: G
Words: 207
Spoilers?: None; well Krile's in the party so that's kind of a spoiler.
Author's Note: Not sure if it fits the theme too well other than there being no dialogue, sorry.

( Anyone could see that Lenna was beautiful )

pairing: krile/lenna, author: eowynjedi, prompt: silence, fandom: ffv

Comments 5

hamimifk June 29 2009, 23:00:02 UTC

That was cute. ): But it seriously had nothing to do with the prompt... But I'll allow it on the basis that Krile's views of Lenna are in away, silent musings. lol, but next time, make sure to keep more to the prompt. The drabble doesn't have to be exactly about a given prompt, the prompt need only be mentioned somewhere in the drabble for it to count.

All that aside, I liked your drabble. And even though I know nothing of FFV, I like that others are branching out into non-mainstream FF games. (: It's good to read something different from time to time. Thanks for sharing and I hope you stick around. ^.^

eowynjedi June 29 2009, 23:50:26 UTC

Yeah sorry >< It was supposed to be about silence but it ended up not being about it... I edited in a line about not being able to say it so it retroactively fits.

But thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll do my best to be active here; this is a neat community. :]

hamimifk June 30 2009, 00:04:24 UTC

Ah, good job with the extra line. lol, even if gave you a non-hundred number (remember, keep it 100, 200, 300, 400, or 500 words from here on out), which is fine once in awhile when something like this happens.

^.^ You're welcome. :D Yay! I can't wait to see more from you. lol You even got your own author tag now!

m_aenea June 30 2009, 00:24:51 UTC

FFV!!! *squee*

i love the all the little things Krile notices - giggling at a mini spell, finding shapes in the clouds, helping animals. (in my FFV game i made Lenna a Ranger - i think that's the job class name, anyway - and i abused the animal-call-thingy. XD ) they all seem very...Lenna-ish. ^^

eowynjedi June 30 2009, 19:16:46 UTC

Yay, another FFV fan! And I'm glad you liked it. :] Lenna always seemed to me the sort of person who would find all the little good things in traveling. (And the Ranger job fits both her and Krile so well for that. Death by squirrels FTW.)