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She Blooms in Tears - Yuna/Lulu (FFX)

Jun 25, 2009 22:00

Title: She Blooms in Tears
Fandom: FFX
Pairing: Yuna/Lulu
Prompt: Rainy Day
Rating: PG
Words: 500

( Rain crawls down the skin... )

prompt: rainy day, pairing: lulu/yuna, fandom: ffx, author: auronlu

Comments 4

hamimifk June 26 2009, 13:20:19 UTC

^.^ So beautiful and cute! I love your descriptions, they give such a lovely atmosphere to the story.

>>"Mm?" Lulu kisses your forehead, making simple words sinful with that husky purr. "We could stay in."

>D I love this part!

m_aenea June 27 2009, 01:34:00 UTC

i love the imagery in this - rain and water and pyreflies and flowers that only last a day. (the romantic in me loves that idea XD )

and i'm always impressed by people who can make the second-person perspective work.

aleriadeufania October 26 2009, 08:45:47 UTC

Quite beautiful. It isn't often that the second person POV is used (and used well, for that matter).

. . . . . . . . dark_sot_coin December 30 2009, 09:51:43 UTC

Beautiful. Simply, and utterly beautiful . . . .