I think this is my favorite of the series so far. Great idea with the fireworks, and I love that kiss at the end. You seemed to build up to it really naturally, and it fit the story perfectly. I also hope they can meet in the waking world one day, but it's also understandable if they can't.
Like I said, we'll see. I have plans for this series, but starting tomorrow I'm taking a short break from it to think up venue ideas. But not to worry! Your daily dose of Yuri a la Machina will not be missed. I will post at least one story every day, as I have done so far.
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But not to worry! Your daily dose of Yuri a la Machina will not be missed. I will post at least one story every day, as I have done so far.
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