Comments | ff_roundrobin: Bedevil, Ch. 17

ladytalon1 in ff_roundrobin

Bedevil, Ch. 17

Feb 28, 2007 20:56

Title: Bedevil, Chapter 17
Author: ladytalon1
Characters: Mal/Jayne
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine, not making any $$
Word Count: 1,000

Bedevil Organizational Post

( Read more... )

mal/jayne, bedevil, slash

Comments 8

(The comment has been removed)

bookaddict43 March 1 2007, 13:00:31 UTC

Yep I'm next. I hope I do ok *worries*

ladytalon1 March 1 2007, 13:56:58 UTC

...just make sure there's no coitus interruptus all of a sudden. You won't get off the hook that easy, young lady. *shakes finger in your general direction* But if you need someone to look it over or suggestions, you know where to find me :)

ladytalon1 March 1 2007, 14:02:13 UTC

The boys have waited so long, they deserve to have a nice drawn-out rendezvous :D

bugchicklv March 1 2007, 07:31:57 UTC

OMG that's hot.

ladytalon1 March 1 2007, 14:01:14 UTC

Thank you! :)

That icon is priceless, BTW. It maketh me giggle.

bookaddict43 March 1 2007, 12:58:26 UTC

You're evil girl *shakes fist*, but you did good! A very hot chapter here. I liked how you showed Jayne as longing but hesitant, he doesn't suddenly know exactly what to do! I also like Mal's reaction - now I have to write something *gulp*.

ladytalon1 March 1 2007, 14:00:38 UTC

Mwa-ha. I can't wait to see what you'll do now... *bounces up and down excitedly*

mercsgoodgirl April 4 2007, 17:16:04 UTC

So I just got around to this after reading the first few chapters way back when and I'm lovin' it.

This line was my absolute fave: “You’ve sure been keepin’ some secrets, Jayne Cobb,” he breathed as he took in the sheer size and heft of the most dangerous weapon in his mercenary’s arsenal.

To parody the words of Mr. Universe, "You guys bring me the best pr0n!"