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Balanced, Chapter 13

Nov 13, 2006 03:30

Title: Balanced, Chapter 13
Pairing: Mal/Simon, eventual Mal/Simon/Jayne
Rating: PG, omg! XD
Notes: This is brought to you, as always, by the patience and encouragement of the lovely woodsong_1978. Sorry like woah for the delay, but my life has been somewhat odd and hectic of late, so I've not been able to get much of anything done. ><

Balanced Org Post

( Balanced, Chapter 13 )

threesome, mal/simon/jayne, balanced, slash

Comments 6

lvs2read November 12 2006, 18:47:36 UTC

Yay! A new chapter! And nicely done, too. I love the back & forth snarkiness. It's so them. *g*

kitsunesan November 12 2006, 18:55:54 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, I still have trouble writing these two as a pair, so it's nice to hear that I can manage it well. ^^ *hearts*

anxiety_junkie November 12 2006, 19:06:19 UTC

Ooh, lovely! I like how they aren't hedging around and being all secretive about it with each other, though it's so like Simon to just blurt it out, isn't it? *g*

Ok, so who's next to claim?

kitsunesan November 13 2006, 04:14:47 UTC

Glad you liked it sweetie. I think Vae said it's her turn, but so long as no one's as slow as me, it'll be fine. *facepalm*

bookaddict43 November 14 2006, 10:49:37 UTC

Love the back and forth between the two and the fact that Simon broached the subject first! Now I want to know what Jayne's feeling about the Captain's slip...

kitsunesan November 14 2006, 16:47:36 UTC

Hee hee, I love your icon. ^^ Glad that you liked this, I love to write people bickering. X3