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Balanced, Chapter 6

Sep 21, 2006 17:35

Title: Balanced Chapter 6
Rating: PG-13
Timeline: Post-series, no BDM

Balanced Org Post

Okay, I meant to get to teh smut, but the boys decided we needed more plot instead. ‘Sides, wouldn’t want to end it too quickly, now would we? (And this way we get to keep lvs2read for a while longer, too. *g*) Translations in mouseover.

( On to the distinct lack of smut. )

threesome, mal/simon/jayne, balanced, slash

Comments 9

lvs2read September 22 2006, 01:21:52 UTC

Ooh! We have a stowaway! But his name is Jud, not Jacob. And Simon owies! Nicely done! Be interesting to see where this goes from here.

anxiety_junkie September 22 2006, 01:23:30 UTC

But his name is Jud, not Jacob. Gorramit! I'll fix it now.

So does this mean you'll stick around for a while, maybe claim another chapter?

lvs2read September 22 2006, 01:27:32 UTC

Thanks for fixing. *g* You can blame his name on Vae. I needed to give him one, and she suggested it. *bg* Think Oklahoma!

Whether I write more or not depends on where the story goes, (there's a couple people who need to claim before I should again) but I'll stick around to read it even if I stop writing. *g*

bookaddict43 September 22 2006, 11:33:43 UTC

Oh no! A stowaway! This does not bode well for our BDHs. Is he after Jayne or Mal? I like Jayne hoping to outrun the Mal induced dizziness and the mutual worry both men experience for Simon is very telling for future chapters.

anxiety_junkie September 22 2006, 18:15:24 UTC

Is he after Jayne or Mal? Oh, that isn't for me to decide. *g*

I'm glad you caught the mutual worry part, I had to rewrite this a few times to bring that out. *bg*

kitsunesan September 22 2006, 14:09:17 UTC

*cuddles Jayne* Oooh, ze plot thickens! Can't wait to see where this ends up. Would claim, but I just wrote, and I still fail at teh plot. XD

anxiety_junkie September 22 2006, 18:16:24 UTC

Come on, you can't be nearly as bad at plot as you seem to think. *pokes*

kitsunesan September 22 2006, 20:59:56 UTC

No, I really can. XD Though thunder_nari and I have recently learned that we both love to torture our characters, and we have the world's most horrifyingly heartbreakingly painful plotty-ness devised for our Simon/Wash RP... *taps fingers together evilly*

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anxiety_junkie September 23 2006, 07:09:44 UTC

Oh goody! I'm so glad! Take all the time you need, dear. Especially since Prodigal Son could use a claim as well. *hint hint*