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Bedeviled, Ch 9

Aug 24, 2006 20:56

This is my first attempt at anything M/M, but I just couldn't let this one get away. Please be gentle.

I know in one of the chapters, there was something said about Jayne not being picky. But I...made him a little picky. Still willing, just...not with men like marco and... *sigh* I'm sorry. I wrote this before re-reading everything.

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mal/jayne, bedevil, slash

Comments 7

bookaddict43 August 25 2006, 07:48:34 UTC

I like it! Great first try at the M/M thing!

You did so well with Jayne's doubts and desires. The respect he feels for Mal clearly making it easier for him. And then the Captain lousing it up like that *shakes head* - of course he'd complicate things!

stormwolf_dawn7 August 25 2006, 15:53:13 UTC

Am very confused?

rinalin August 26 2006, 03:39:27 UTC

I made it so the smut was just all in Jayne's imagination. Sorry that that wasn't clear.

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rinalin August 26 2006, 03:37:16 UTC

Oh, damn. I intended the whole smut thing to be in Jayne's imagination. And then this takes place back in the reality. I was with someone else, thinking that all that came too suddenly, so I wanted to draw it out. I worried that it didn't come through clearly.

*sigh*

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rinalin August 26 2006, 06:56:38 UTC

Hopefully! I really tried, but...I sucked, yeah.

Here's hoping the next person picks up soon!

bugchicklv February 28 2007, 04:10:55 UTC

So, now that my crazy time is over I've decided to go back and catch up on all of the stuff I missed and zomg.

Thank you for this.

I don't think I even need to tell you why.

rinalin February 28 2007, 15:50:29 UTC

*giggles* You're terribly welcome.

I rather had fun fixing the problem. Made me feel all evil like.

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