Gen: Iniquitous Ch. 7

[imogenn]

Iniquitous Organizational Post

Fic Title: Iniquitous, Chapter 7
Setting: Post-Series/Pre-BDM
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Uh, Jayne's kind of ultra-man-man. I know he's sweeter than he looks in here. Sorry for the wait and the following crazy. It's so very, very crazy.

Comments

[cheshire_monkey]

WOW! I love how Inara tried to get YoSaffBridgLiseFran... you know who, away from the ship. Very nice.

Heh - and MEN! Between Jayne wanting the girls to get it on and Mal wanting to know if they kissed, they are just too much. *love them*

You did an amazing job here. I can't wait to see how it all wraps up.

[_turtledove]

Ingenious! I normally don't care much for Inara, but I love how clever she was in her exchange with Mal and YoSaffBrigEtc. *glee*

Rather than spamming each chapter entry, I'll just spam this one to pay my compliments to everyone who's written a piece. This was one fun read - the voices and characterizations were spot-on, and the plotline as plausible as it was excellent. I look forward to the next installment!

[rinalin]

Eeeep!

I have to follo this??

Fantastic! Wonderfully played out!

[traingeek]

I'm amazed you could write this so soon after computer mayhem - shiny!

[matchlightfire]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! AMAZING!!!
:) You are my hero:)

this: “Could they… kiss first?” Jayne asked and Inara’s hand left red marks in the shape of her fingers on Mal’s face. Jayne chuckled, and contemplated what he might say next to see if he could get her to kick Mal in his man-parts.
just. [sigh]
just when I think it can't possibly get better [wink].