Gen: Shadow: Chapter 12

[sagey1899]

Shadow Organizational Post

Title: Shadow
Chapter: 12
Setting: Post-Series/Pre-BDM
Pairing: See above
Raiting: pg-13ish
A/N: I'm not very happy with this chap but hopefully my take on things makes sense and doesn't mess anything up. Sorry it's so short. Thanks to grapho_spasm and quillscribe for their help. :)

Comments

[quillscribe]

Dear God, you know how to throw in twists... Hmmm, I'd thought that the Browncoats were killing the Rangers that the Capricorn base guy already dispatched... So you had the hands of blue catch up with them, huh?

Um... So his daughter's alive? Or are they just saying? Or... Oh my... Okay... I like a challenge... *claim?*

So, if you don't mind, I'm curious to hear where *you* wanted to go with this? *gulps*

:-D

[sagey1899]

do you have aim? my id is moluiadh1743 we'll chat :)

[rinalin]

Ohhhhhhhh. Wow.

Fantastic.

That's just... mind blowing. Mal's daughter.

Wow.

And the crew... and Joshua and the blue hands and...everything.

*is very confused over the Browncoats/Bluehands/Rangers/Capricorns Children.*

I have no idea who's who, who's on who's side and all. Hopefully someone can clarify in future chapters, but other than that, fantastic!

[sagey1899]

thanks, i'm glad you liked.

I'm a bit confused on who's where and on who's side too but Joshua jumped in and wouldn't go away so I kinda had to let him do his thing. I get the feeling he will be a permanent character for me now in my other fics....hmmmm

[sagey1899]

always glad to get new readers! :)
I'm glad you've joined us.
Somehow I don't think this will be wrapped up in 20 or so chapters. There is so much that is demanding to be told *glee*

[ktxx]

wow good twist! my jaw actually hit the floor! was a great chapter and can't wait to see what happens next!
ktxx

[traingeek]

geez! I love where you took this!