Unchained (FFIV; Rydia/Edge; R)

Feb 16, 2009 13:46

Unchained

Fandom: FFIV
Pairing: Rydia/Edge
Rating: R (Warnings: of the naked persuasion)

I love that my first post into ff_kissbattle is actually smut. Ah, well. I LOVE THIS MEME, GUYS.

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astrangerenters February 20 2009, 01:48:13 UTC
Mmmmmm very very good :) :)

It's nice to see Edge not acting like a goofball

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justira February 20 2009, 04:00:56 UTC
Woo! FINALLY FEEDBACK.

Sorry, I had DELAYS. But now I am HERE and HOOOOOOTING at having my prompt filled! WITH PORN NO LESS.

I like this strangely gentle note you've hit; it hits the prompts but keeps it with this kind of gentle intensity. It's very nice. I love how you keep coming back the all the various identities here (how many people are in this room? A king, a summoner, a man, a woman....). But in the end, it's just them.

IN OTHER WORDS: THANK YOU SEV!

Plz rite moar Edge/Rydia sooooooon?

Some miscellaneous notes:

That small sentence about Edge's body:

it feels alive, as if it’s his, rather than an ornament: he claims it, and claims her.

Yes. I! I loved this part! I just rings real true for me.

Also:

Rydia shudders underneath him with another one of those sounds he can’t name but saves in the back of his head to remember during long boring council meetings

I just! Laughed. Oh. Edge.

SIDENOTE. Why am I so tickled about this bit of meta?

Rydia told him once that the magic in her blood takes its energy from her bones ( ... )

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first_seventhe February 21 2009, 02:46:47 UTC
I AM SO GLAD :):) It's an awesome excuse to write one of my FAVORITE pairings (WHICH BY THE WAY YOU SHOULD TOTALLY WRITE WHEN DONE WITH CLARION, HA HA HA)

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justira February 21 2009, 05:35:42 UTC
BUT I *AM* DONE WITH CLARION.

It is sitting in google docs, shared all around, waiting for some very tough love .___________.

I'm kind of! Terrified!

BUT. THANK YOU AGAIN.

I do not yet feel 300% confident with FFIV canon but I am hoping to write for it soon! I just! Should play the DS version like for serious ._.

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first_seventhe February 23 2009, 13:15:24 UTC
Oh, I saw it! THIS WEEK, BABY. TOUGH LOVE IS ON THE MENU.

And the DS version is awesome. Not to tempt you or anything!

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xgothkittenx February 17 2010, 07:10:40 UTC
oh, i know this is a year old but i just found this by looking up "rydia edge smut" on google! haha. and i love it! i want more!!!!

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themdena September 1 2010, 01:16:29 UTC
I just love it!!! ty :)

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