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[sparky77]

All the wonderful Serenity stories have inspired me and I wanted to throw this little fic into mix. This is an incident I have some issues with so this was kind of therapeutic for me :)
It's 587 words and is Simon reflecting on a certain notorious incident (well for me anyway) that occured between him and Mal. Hope you enjoy!

Comments

[maystone]

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. Yes!

His face had been a mask of rage, but his eyes had only shown loss and pain.

See, that's why I could always forgive Mal for that punch.

This is wonderful, Q. I love it all. Yeah - even the last sentence :)

[sparky77]

Thanks :)

I don't know when I got so sympathetic towards Mal. It's really frightening me. I need to write something from Mal's perspective, I think that's when his true assness comes out (but I do love him!)

And I wouldn't worry to much about Simon ever decking Mal. The poor boy doesn't stand a chance... unless he gets Mal drunk first.

[sparky77]

the way you put "incident" in quotes just gave me a very, very bad idea.

[kelly_girl]

Very nice Q! I like how Simon just automatically diagnoses himself and how he knows it was wrong to provoke Mal.

I like the last line because I like wondering what could happen where Simon would have a chance, or just a reason to hit Mal.

[sparky77]

Isn't Mal's existence enough reason to want to hit him? :)

[kelly_girl]

I thought his existence was enough reason to want to screw him but okay, I'll go with your interpretation.

[sparky77]

The two could probably be combined.