Comments | ff_friday: To Bed

thewalnut in ff_friday

To Bed

Jun 12, 2003 23:53

700-ish words. Much closer to the wire this week. I blame summer (the bastard!). Big thanks to skripka and sffan for quick beta-ing and title advice and general moral support. I'm a big dork. And they don't seem to care that much. Or they're nice about it anyway. I'm really very grateful.

( Fics with dialogue are shorter than they appear! )

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Comments 15

igeria June 14 2003, 11:10:21 UTC

This is one of those fics where I just HAVE to list my favorite lines. Because they are so favorite.

"And here I thought you were just trying to reaffirm your masculinity"

"You're not taking her anywhere!"

"I meant your own beds. Whatever. Just go be quiet." That "Whatever. Just go be quiet?" SO Mal. But you knew that.

And then, just when you have disarmed me with your comedy, that ending. Perfect.

thewalnut June 15 2003, 07:49:54 UTC

awww, igeria. Thanks. I really was nervous about this one, so it's nice to know that it's working.

canadiian June 14 2003, 18:54:35 UTC

Very very nice. So real and honest, and sigh, I just love your Zoe. Keep writing.

thewalnut June 15 2003, 08:09:18 UTC

Thanks canadiian! A lot! And this is like the first time I've ever focused on Zoe in anything... but now I'm feeling braver about writing for her. Anyway. Thanks again. I'm really grateful.