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Redux 15: Challenge 41. The Morning After

Jun 30, 2008 20:12

Dawn Of Serenity
Author: jackwabbit
Rated: PG
Category: Gen, Ficlet (365 words), Mal/Zoe Friendship (Take It As You Will).
Spoilers: Out Of Gas.
Summary: The Morning After… Serenity.
Note: Written in response to the LJ prompt of ‘The Morning After’ on ff_friday.
Disclaimer: Yeah, yeah, yeah…don’t own ‘em but wish like hell someone other than Fox did.

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041 (the morning after)

Comments 6

phyrelight July 1 2008, 01:01:19 UTC

*snark* I was thinking yesterday that there were probably more than a few nights where those two had to share the same blanket to keep warm at night.

jackwabbit July 1 2008, 01:29:52 UTC

Got me in one! I left this intentionally open to interpretation (after three different versions of it...and as many days trying to decide which one I liked best...some were more spelled out than others), but that's how I meant it.

And. It. Was. Oh. So. Much. Evil. Fun.

ncb1 July 1 2008, 03:44:16 UTC

Wabbit,

You out did yourself on this one. And I agree with Phyrelight, they more than likely shared more than one night under the same blanket.

jackwabbit July 1 2008, 03:55:10 UTC

Wow! Thanks! I just couldn't help myself. The idea came easily. The story, not so much. I really do have three versions...and the choice was hard, but I think this is it. So glad you all are enjoying it!

As for Mal and Zoe under one blanket, got to go with Jack O'Neill there:

YA THINK?

(Oh, yes...I do...and it makes for so much fun! Did I say that yet?)

romanceguru July 2 2008, 04:53:55 UTC

I knew it! Wait…I really like how you kept things vague, it makes it much more fun that way. Your Mal/Zoe banter is easy and wonderful. This would have made an awesome ‘actual’ flash back.

jackwabbit July 2 2008, 15:55:06 UTC

Thanks so much!

I especially appreciate your comments on the banter-banter's my favorite!