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challenge redux

Oct 01, 2005 22:56

(eeee my first post here! also, unbeta-ed. please be kind)

Title: Smaller Repairs
Rated: PG (for the word damn i guess)
Challenge # 41: The morning after
Character: Zoe
Word Count: 410
Summary: SERENITY(BDM) SPOILERS ABOUND!!! With the battle over, Zoe fixes what she can.

( here there be spoilers...and fic )

041 (the morning after)

Comments 19

vyvolat_hokej October 2 2005, 03:48:43 UTC

Oh, that was touching.

I cried too. I started crying when Book died. And then Wash. I cried even more when it looked like Simon was going to die. And then the funeral made me cry even more.

comedykitty October 2 2005, 03:57:58 UTC

thanks! i got choked up when Book died. I wasn't a huge fan of him, but he grew on me by the end of my DVDs. But Wash has always been my favorite. That entire battle had be on the edge of my seat, particularly when simon was hit.

thank you for the review though! :)

vyvolat_hokej October 2 2005, 04:01:24 UTC

Yep, yep, me too.

You've restarted my FF muse, which is good since I've got to write 52 of 'em for 52_flavours . . .

comedykitty October 2 2005, 04:12:51 UTC

heh, my muse has abandon me for years. just recently came back. still a bit rusty but hey :) i'm honored to have jolted it back. good luck with 52. yikes...

Thread 6

tartsweetheart October 2 2005, 06:31:10 UTC

Poor Zoe.

I had my hand over my mouth (open in hurt..sort of thing) while reading this. Just...WASH!

comedykitty October 2 2005, 12:23:07 UTC

awwww, thanks! i really love that icon as a by-the-way. :)

tartsweetheart October 2 2005, 22:04:43 UTC

crystalkirk, who made it, is an icon goddess, as far as I'm concerned.

This icon completely epitomizes Wash to me. And it's so purty.

Oh, yeah. That was all a long-winded thank you. I'm actually sort of touched that you like it.

comedykitty October 2 2005, 22:15:37 UTC

hmmm i shall have to stalk her and get icons. it definatly just screams "IAMWASH" :p

Thread 9

mishbloom October 2 2005, 19:06:55 UTC

I'm with you. I actually had *peeked* at the Serenity Soundtrack, so I knew something was going to happen to Book. But Wash....oh poor Wash....

And the scene with the dinos back up....*sniffles*

I'm a crier anyway. So you can imagine how bad it tore me up when Wash got killed.

This is good though. I don't want to even imagine how hard it must have been for Zoe. Ouch!

comedykitty October 2 2005, 22:14:47 UTC

I had peeked at some non-spoiler reveiws and it said that two people were going to die. I knew Book was, but i was trying to think of the second person. As Serenity was crashing, my friend said "do you think Serenity could be that second character...?" And yeah, i'm known for crying during movies constantly. I didn't expect to be so...affected by it. Just shows how awesome/STUPID Joss is. :p

I thought Gina pulled off Zoe's inner-angst so well. Just stoned faced, but the eyes were just pure devestation. One of the last scenes when she's walking away from Mal, her face was just haunted. It totally inspired this.

Oh and uh...thanks for the reveiw. :D

budclare October 5 2005, 03:00:14 UTC

I could see any of them putting the dinos back, actually, including Jayne. My personal favorite is Mal, though. *smells a plot bunny* Dammit. *ingores the plot bunny*

Anyway, this is a nice little fic. I think that it could probably do without the first few sentences, but that's just me. And paragraphs would be keen. But other than that, it's fine. And sad, obviously. *sighs*

comedykitty October 5 2005, 12:09:20 UTC

i thought about breaking it up a bit, but something changed my mind. but thanks for the comment!