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[Art] FFXII - Introductions (Balthier/Fran/Vaan) (PG) for carbonatedh2o

Aug 24, 2009 07:31

Title: Introductions
For: carbonatedh2o
Medium: Arts! line art and colour =D
Request(s): FFXII: Balthier/Fran/Vaan - Balthier and Fran in an established relationship, introduce Vaan to the wonders of... sex or something. If you don't want to do the sex part, though, that's fine.

Fandom(s): FFXII:OGC
Characters/Pairings: Balthier/Fran/Vaan
Rating/Warnings: PG ( Read more... )

[medium] art, ! [round 002] .gifts, ff12 [char] fran, ff12 [all] final fantasy xii: ogc, [tag] f/m/m, ff12 [all] final fantasy xii, ff12 [char] vaan, ff12 [ship] balthier/fran/vaan, ! [round 002], ff12 [char] balthier

Comments 14

tinamachina August 24 2009, 12:32:59 UTC

...Wow!

justira August 24 2009, 13:59:27 UTC

I hope that's a good wow? XD

>.>

tinamachina August 24 2009, 14:42:30 UTC

That's a "I can't find the adequate words as to how freakin' HOT this is" wow!

This rules!

justira August 24 2009, 16:03:13 UTC

Ahaha, thank you! That is definitely good wow XD

auronlu August 24 2009, 13:39:37 UTC

Holy Frickin' Squee doesn't even begin to encompass my reaction.

You have, indeed, fixed the hands. I was blind as a bat when looking at the original and had somehow gotten Balthier's and Fran's right hands mixed up, despite obvious fingernails and shape. I stand corrected. And it's even better now that I see how much Fran is directing it all.

This?
Win!

justira August 24 2009, 14:01:20 UTC

Ahaha, no, it's cool, in the original doodle Balthier had like tiny little girl-hands, so it was an easy mistake to make! I'm hoping they're more distinct now, and it should be clear in the coloured version? I hope XD

And oh yes, Fran is so in charge of this. XD

As always, thanks for commenting! =D

auronlu August 24 2009, 14:39:42 UTC

Oh yes, it is all crystal clear now.
The coloring also helps draw the attention to the fact that she's not just holding them, but peeling off Vaan's vest.

Clever Frans...

lassarina August 24 2009, 15:18:45 UTC

Wow! I mean, wow. The colours do an amazing amount for this, definitely helping to note whose hands are where (why is that ALWAYS A PROBLEM in threesomes, fic or art?) and eeeeeee. Just. So pretty.

justira August 24 2009, 16:13:17 UTC

Ahaha, A+ for 2am frantic drawing! My frantic backup stint was not nearly as epic as yours, though >.>

Haha, god, THREESOMES. I love planning out threesome art and where all the limbs and lips and hands go but aaaargh what a pain it can be, trying to make clear who goes where!

Anyway, uh! Thank you =D

carbonatedh2o August 24 2009, 16:14:03 UTC

Thank you so much! It's beautiful! And don't worry - I understand the whole having little time thing. You've done beautifully for so little time. Again, thank you.

justira August 24 2009, 16:16:38 UTC

Thank you for understanding ._.

I will try to make some CD for your prompts to make it up to you -- it's just been a totally frantic round, with people defaulting left and right. Anyway, I hope you like it =\

carbonatedh2o August 24 2009, 16:19:22 UTC

You don't have to give me CD to make up for it, really. I love it the way it is, and that was the prompt I was hoping the most for anyway. XD

heybitchmove August 25 2009, 04:17:56 UTC

Jizzinmypants, this is amazing.

To say that I am in awe and possibly turned on would be an understatement. Props.

justira September 16 2009, 17:37:06 UTC

FFF LATE REPLY IS REALLY LATE sorry, I got caught up in mod stuff!

Thank you so much for the comment, but I have to admit that what most catches my notice here is YOUR ICON OH MY GOD XDDDDD