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[fey_puck]

Why can't I leave them alone? Honestly. I'm such a bad mistress, it's no wonder the muses flee in terror

Comments

[elfsoto]

Woah. Sorry, I'm not very coherent right now. All the thoughts about how this would alter the storyline are swirling madly around in my brain, preventing me from leaving a good comment. Write more please!

[fey_puck]

I welcome all comments *g* My thoughts have been in a similar state since about 3 in the morning, when this bugger bit me. Thanks for readin!

[gogoangelgunboy]

mmmm....now i'm liking the idea that gojyo actually killed her, and that jien then took the blame, and gojyo finally allowed himself to believe that his brother had killed his mother to save him...*stares mistily off into space* it's so believable...can't you see him holding gojyo and telling him over and over that gojyo hadn't done it, that he had until the traumatised kid believed him....

[fey_puck]

Doesn't it answer and create so many questions? This bunny has been bugging me all day so I was like "Fine then" to get it out and now....oh man. I feel a new obsession coming on (ppor Spawn are going to be silent for a while). I can either go down the path you mentioned, because I CAN see Jien doing that and it would fit so perfectly, or I can alter play around with the storyline, which you know I can't resist doing in the end.

And there's lightening flashing everywhere outside. Like it knows I'm up to something. Bwah.

[gracie_musica]

Actually, I like the idea of this being one of Jien's dreams... I think that it would scare Jien more to think that his little brother had to kill his mother than he did it to protect him.

[fey_puck]

That makes sense too! Jien was always trying to protect Gojyo and Gojyo's killing her would be like an ultimate failure in some regards.

Eeee....I feel like a little kid with a new toy to play with XD

[sasateq]

*speechless* *recovers* Nice. Very. *relapse*

[fey_puck]

Thanks so much! =D

[akisawana]

Dark and shiny. Definetly interesed in more.

[fey_puck]

Thanks! I'll definately be writing more to it ^^

[mainekosama]

Wow. You managed to put so much emotion in so little words. This is/was really really well done. Not that I'm trying to imply something, but it would make an excellent prologue ... ;-)

[fey_puck]

Thanks muchly, darlin. Something about the Sha's make me all...*waves hands about* Yeah. So twisted and kicked around...I love them =P

*grins* Well, now that you mention it...