second choice

[fetusziall]

and the whole time he's wishing that he's a good person, a better person, anyone other than the selfish bastard that he is now.

thank you to ida because you're my best friend ever and i love you more than life itself and i hope you like this one. i'm not sure if its quite what you wanted, but i did try, so let me know what you think okay ilysm

Comments

[blueasyoureyes]

oh. wow.

you're my favourite ziall writer. you always do them so honest, so realistic.

this hurt so much with everyone being so bitter and in love with people who didn't want them back. they're all little shits but i felt sorry for them and wanted them to be okay.

the last line was such a nice contrast to the rest of it, a lovely ending.

i love this a lot. i love all your writing a lot :)

(i'm really bad at comments, i never say what i'm trying to say but know that i love it!)

[fetusziall]

you are literally my favorite person on here??? and honestly i love you so much, you're perfect omg ily and i'm glad i made you feel for the characters.

yes. they're all a bunch of stupid little shits, but if they weren't i wouldn't have anything to write about.

i love your comment, and i think you're really good at comments too so don't worry! thank you for reading :)