One Shot: At the Dry Wall

[fernedakki]

Title: At the Dry Wall

Authors: fernedakki
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: Overall NC-17 (Domestic violence involved)
Genre: AU / Angst
Word Count: 1,935 Words

Disclaimer: The boys belong to Liverpool FC. The story line belongs to…well, you’ll know it when you finish reading this short whimsical fic.

A/N: End credits below.

Comments

[luisaakainsane]

That was really good. Angsty but good.

You're a great writer :).

[fernedakki]

Thanks. Glad you like it ^^

[pacatusum]

I love how you used the songtext
Great done :D

[fernedakki]

Thx, i'm glad you like it ;)

[poynterjoness]

Oh man, that was so good!

I was supposed to do a story like that, with that song and that pairing, but nooo way I can do it after that fic.
It was amazingly good written!

Loved it.

[fernedakki]

Thanks. Glad you like it ^^
You can try writing fic with another song, lol. I'm sorry i took this song before you :/

[chocoholic_81]

Wow.
I'm not a fan of too angsty stories. But this is really good.
Great writing!!!
I love how you express, how they can't let go of each other.

[fernedakki]

Thanks, i'm glad you like it. It's actually the first violence fic i've ever written too :/

[marie16fh]

This hurts to read! Seriously! Damnit, Dan, why do you have to be like that? Fucking abusive, that's what... :'( But this was amazing, very well written. Pulling me in both directions. I want to be able to not read and I want to dislike; but I can't. Great piece!

[fernedakki]

Lol, you don't have to if it's that unbearable. Fernando was so pathetic, and it hurt me too writing him being abused by Dan. But that's the way it is in this story, sometimes love is just painful like that.

Thank you for finishing it anyway, and thx for the comment ;D