Of Heroes and Fools: a Dragon Age fanfic

[ferasha]

After lurking on various Dragon Age LJ communities for several months, I finally managed to gather up the courage and come out with my own piece of fanfiction

Comments

prvi komentar!!!

[anonymous]

i konacno da prikazes fic svetu u svoj njegovoj slavi!

Ovo zasluzuje sparkles i srca!

Re: prvi komentar!!!

[ferasha]

Sad kad sam zvanicno izasla iz ormana, videcemo da li ce se na ovome i zavrsiti.

HVALA NA CESTITKAMA I SRCIMA!

And you should really get that account, honey... :)

[jenova]

I saw this from mistiqart's deviation... this is amazing. Dark and intense and vivid. It's hard to put my impressions into words, but this is brilliant writing. I hope you'll have more to share! :)

[ferasha]

Wow... I'm really glad that you liked it and thank you for your comment! You made me blush with all those words of praise, especially about my writing, because I'm not a native speaker and this was the first time a wrote something in English!

As for more, I do have several plot nugs running wild in my head, but we shall see whether one day some of them will be turned into stories...

(By the way, I guess this is a good moment to tell you that I like your Alessar A LOT - I'm just too shy to leave comments... :))

[jenova]

I honestly couldn't tell that English isn't your first language -- you did a marvelous job on that front as well! :) I'll look forward to what you may post in the future, then. ^^

(And thanks very much! *^^* )

[kaispan]

wow, that was amazing! I really love how you left the ending open. brilliant writing, indeed ^^

[ferasha]

Thank you! :)

I'm fond of open endings in general, because they allow the reader to "participate" in the story by choosing how to interpret the ending. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[kaispan]

well great thinking with that, then--it worked out very well! and I never would have guessed English wasn't your native language either. :O

[alias_sqbr]

Wow, this is amazing, definitely a unique and effective spin on the story. I like that there's no moral or neat conclusion, it just is what it is.

[ferasha]

Thanks! And sometimes, conclusions are overrated... :)

[ashfae]

Ohh what an evil, interesting variation! Levels and levels of manipulation and twisted desires, with rock-solid writing to boot. Absolutely fascinating. Thanks for a truly unique story.

[ferasha]

And thank you for leaving a comment!

I must say that before I posted it I was afraid that people might find it overly dark or even squicky, but given the positive reactions, it seems that Dragon Age fans can be pretty bloodthirsty...

Good to know for possible future works :)