fic: Trust

Sep 28, 2012 00:34

Title: Trust
Author: fengirl88
Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing: John/Lestrade
Rating: R
Warnings: none
Wordcount: 3 x 221b ficlets
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine.
Summary: “Seems a pity to cut it,” Lestrade says, pulling and twisting John’s hair just hard enough. "Still, if you're sure..."
A/N: written for innie_darling's request for "John/Lestrade, ( Read more... )

rating: r, challenge: cottoncandy_bingo, 221b ficlet, pairing: john/lestrade, category: slash

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innie_darling September 27 2012, 23:48:40 UTC
Mmm, very nice! I liked how quickly the story moves from physical ease to mental distance to getting back a spark. Thank you so much!

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fengirl88 September 28 2012, 09:10:32 UTC
thank you - I'm very glad you liked it! *beams*

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eglantine_br September 28 2012, 01:06:05 UTC
You made a clippers haircut erotic-- how did you do that? Really good. Really really...

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fengirl88 September 28 2012, 09:12:07 UTC
thank you! I found the actual haircut difficult to write, but apparently my solution to this is to add more kink... *grins*

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thesmallhobbit September 28 2012, 21:41:21 UTC
This is lovely: the way one small thing upsets them, and then there is a period of awkwardness before their relationship is restored and John's trust is rewarded.

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fengirl88 September 28 2012, 22:26:03 UTC
thank you very much - once the reunion came up I knew there was going to be trouble, but I also knew there had to be a happy ending!

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rusty_armour October 10 2012, 00:37:07 UTC
First of all, I love the double meaning of this story's title: that Lestrade has to trust John's motives for keeping quiet about their relationship and John has to trust Lestrade with a pair of scissors. ;-) As usual, the dialogue really shines, especially in terms of emotional resonance. Lastly, I think it's wonderful that the haircut is so much more than a haircut for both John and Lestrade. It's tender and almost sexual in nature, with Lestrade treating the whole procedure with infinite care, while John lets go of his tight control and places himself in Lestrade's hands.

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fengirl88 October 11 2012, 21:16:09 UTC
thank you very much - the title was one of the things that gave me most difficulty about this (apart from the haircut itself!) so I'm glad you liked it. I knew I wanted to write this as three 221bs, but John's reunion came as a surprise (as did the blindfold...).

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