Comments | fengirl88: fic: Juice

fengirl88

fic: Juice

Mar 29, 2011 01:49

Title: Juice
Author: fengirl88
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Clara
Rating: R
Warnings: none
Wordcount: ~530
Disclaimer: They're still not mine.
Summary: “Just an orange juice for me,” Harry says, glowing with virtue.
A/N: written for bedamn 's request for Harry/Clara at my writing meme; follows the events of Water

( Juice )

rating: r, character: clara, character: harry, category: angst, series: trouble with harry, fanworks: fic, liquid ficlet, category: femslash

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fengirl88 March 29 2011, 02:37:16 UTC

thank you on both counts! I felt bad about dooming the relationship with Sarah when it had hardly started, but I couldn't believe the Harry in my head!canon would really change. I've seen sympathetic versions of Harry (notably by marysutherland) but can't imagine one for my Clara.

darthhellokitty March 29 2011, 02:33:43 UTC

Oh, Harry! Sarah! I think Clara was quite justified here...

fengirl88 March 29 2011, 02:39:30 UTC

thank you - I'm glad you think so!

kalypso_v requested Harry/Sarah, so I finally committed my first femslash with that most unlikely pairing, but then bedamn asked for Harry/Clara and this happened...

mazarin221b April 16 2011, 12:49:23 UTC

Wow, that's a convoluted mess of a set of relationships (I don't know how I missed "Water," but I've read it now and - yeah.) I like how real everyone is - everyone has issues, no one is perfect. Very nice. I know in the show we'll not ever get to meet Clara, but I really wish we could, her and Harry both, and I have a feeling they'd be a lot like this.

fengirl88 April 16 2011, 13:09:54 UTC

thank you very much - I'm very glad you like it, and that you think this is how they'd be.

thimpressionist April 16 2011, 22:21:22 UTC

OH MY FUCKING GOD MARRY ME WOMAN!

I will return and comment when I'm actually coherent because this is perfection

fengirl88 April 16 2011, 22:40:48 UTC

seriously? wow. thank you very much.

I'm really glad you liked it. I took it down the first time I posted it (on the meme and at AO3) because I wasn't sure about it.

thimpressionist April 18 2011, 03:21:33 UTC

What? No, I thought this was fantastic. I love how spare and evocative it is; you do so much with just the right words.

Dammit Gatiss if you don't give me some lesbians in S2 and they aren't this awesome, I will personally come to England and, well, probably promptly get lost, but I will come to your country! SO COWER IN FEAR!

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fengirl88 April 18 2011, 11:18:09 UTC

thank you! *glows*

well, you could always come here anyway, just to make sure! now if we could just get you and bloomy and turante to London at the same time...

*whistles innocently*

r34dinglight April 16 2011, 23:55:56 UTC

now I am really hoping that at some point we will get to meet Harry and Clara next series.not that they will get to even hint at the dark ill fated fantastic you went to here. and Sarah as the rebound? brilliant!

god, this fandom needs more femslash. like this and more.

fengirl88 April 17 2011, 00:08:07 UTC

thank you very much! so glad you liked this.

I don't hold out much hope for interesting lesbian characterization in series 2 but I continue to be fascinated by the idea of Harry and Clara as offstage characters.

Harry/Sarah was kalypso_v's idea - I would never have thought of it myself! bedamn was the first person I read writing Harry/Clara, and I love what she did with them.

marysutherland has written some terrific Harry/Molly, and I think she has more of that in the pipeline - she's written femslash involving other characters as well (including Sally/Ella).