Bates' distrust of Teyla takes on all kinds of extra nasty connotations in this world. I feel so bad for Rodney, caught in a no win scenario, unable to use his snark to good effect. It will be interesting to see where you go from here. I love the description of Ford! :)
The description of Ford was mostly canon! John tells him 'You're like a big puppy' in this episode and he really does bounce around trying to explore and have fun! John's anger at Rodney was totally canon too. Thank you so much for commenting. Next two chapters are longer and may take a bit of time to sort out.
Poor Rodney :( I'm glad John didn't punish him too harshly. Something needs to be done about Bates - hopefully the same thing happens to him here as it does in S1. He's an ass.
Poor Teyla and her people, too. I hope that situation follows canon too, and they move to the mainland and tensions ease between them and the Atlanteans.
I was really annoyed when Bates turned up in season 4 and John was pleased to see him! Didn't he remember what a prickly git he was? And how he seemed to really dislike Teyla and the Athosians? And how come he switched into the Air Force anyway? Yes - Teyla's people will go to the mainland. It's obviously where they belong now and anyway they need to grow food for their captors... I mean saviours! The next two chapters are meatier and longer and need some work before they are ready for daylight. Thanks for commenting and reading!
I've caught up to where you're at, and friended so i hopefully don't miss new chapters. I'm glad John realised that Rodney had been put in a no-win situation. Looking forward to more. Hopefully less of Bates now, cause he just plain scares me in this 'Verse!
Yes - he's a bit mean...! He will pop up again though. Rodney has more to go through... as soon as it is written and beta-ed! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Oh and friending...!
Amazing fic i have never watch the show, but i liked your white collar slavefic so much that i decided to give it a try, and i loved it so much that now i think iam going to watch the show xD
Haha! Another convert! It's fun and sometimes a bit silly, but watch it with slash goggles and you'll love it! I'm going to post another WC fic here as soon as I get my new laptop up and running. I'm on hubby's pc at the moment...
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Thank you so much for commenting. Next two chapters are longer and may take a bit of time to sort out.
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Poor Teyla and her people, too. I hope that situation follows canon too, and they move to the mainland and tensions ease between them and the Atlanteans.
Great update, I hope we get another one soon ♥
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Yes - Teyla's people will go to the mainland. It's obviously where they belong now and anyway they need to grow food for their captors... I mean saviours!
The next two chapters are meatier and longer and need some work before they are ready for daylight. Thanks for commenting and reading!
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Thanks for giving me a go and for commenting!
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