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fenchurch1

The Bribe Book 2 - Part Five

Aug 18, 2010 18:24

Author : Fenchurch

Warnings: Slavefic so NC-17

Beta: My own Goddess47 to whom be all thanks and praise.

Sorry about the lateness of this part. I had to spend a large amount of time looking through the whole of the Season One scripts to find out if there are, in fact, any other officers other than just John and Ford. I discovered that there are ( Read more... )

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fenchurch1 August 18 2010, 17:43:42 UTC

Wow! That was quick! I haven't even finished posting it to various ljs!!

I'm so glad you are still enjoying this and thank you once again for commenting!

fanarts_series August 18 2010, 17:56:21 UTC

John a besoin de s'occuper de Kavanagh, ou je vais hurler de rage lol !
Excellente part, j'adore ta Teyla et Katie, si douce.

fenchurch1 August 18 2010, 18:00:47 UTC

Merci beaucoup, et pour la prochaine partie j'espère utiliser la bannière que tu m'as offerte - je ne pouvais pas cette fois parce que j'ai ma petite fille sur le genou! Elle adore le portable et ça rend tout plus difficile!!!

Merci pour le comment!

fanarts_series August 18 2010, 18:02:18 UTC

De rien, c'est mérité, fais un gros poutou d'amour à ta princesse, qui commence avec le high tech... brave pitchoune.

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fenchurch1 August 18 2010, 20:22:54 UTC

Thank you - and Kav is just so much fun as a villain!! I have to watch Letters from Pegasus again just to see that 'letter' he sends! John will have a showdown with him next chapter...

Thanks again!

chaoskir August 18 2010, 19:13:19 UTC

Oh so good for Katie and poor Rodney. He always has a hard life. *kicksKavanoughintohisasswithabigswung*

Thanks for this nice update with Katie.

fenchurch1 August 18 2010, 20:23:46 UTC

I'm sure deep down Kavanaugh is a lovely man... NOT! Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you liked Katie.

kazbaby August 18 2010, 20:21:38 UTC

Really great but you left us hanging again! *flails*

I want to so knock Kavanaugh upside the head. I'd like to request that John does this after yanking him by his stupid ponytail. Pretty please.

Thank you for posting this, I've been seriously jonsing for more of this 'verse.

fenchurch1 August 18 2010, 20:25:45 UTC

Sorry for the delay... there is another part on the way. I will carry on with it - I promise, it's just one of those WIPs and, even though I have written quite a lot of it, I've had to re-write as I get it all ready - I keep Josh-ing myself!!

Thank you for the encouragement.