The Bribe - Part Twenty-Three - Conclusion of Book One.
Author: Fenchurch
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Beta’d and greatly improved by the wonderful Goddess47 - this time with a whole added scene and many clarifications - she really is a Goddess!
This is it - the conclusion of the first part of my story. I’m sorry that
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Like Ford already, good that John will have someone to talk to.
Hope end of book one does mean you are going to stop writing, I'm enjoying this too much for you to stop now.
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Thank you very much for letting me know you have enjoyed it so far!
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Thanks for writing!
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And yes, I'd have loved to see him and Ronon together more, when they weren't adversaries. Can you see them as teammates? LOL! Like a mature wolf and a retriever puppy. :D Ford was so damn cute -- him telling John with a straight face that it hurt like hell to go through the gate, then the "Woohoo!" and backwards dive through? That was classic. LOL! I wouldn't have minded them putting him through the wringer and having him mature some, but 1) they didn't have to completely use him up and throw him away, and 2) the way they did it was just so incredibly problematic. [sigh]
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