How do I get myself into these things?

Feb 15, 2010 16:00

Okay, since you people would very obviously know this was from me if I posted it in the 7 replies it would've taken up, here's the 4000-word "drabble" response to the prompt "Tuti/Nagayan - High School AU! I just want them wearing those hot uniforms. And for there to be tons of UST and maybe (hopefully) sex eventually. Maybe Nagayan is a teacher ( Read more... )

drabble challenge, fanfic, 土永

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innusiq February 15 2010, 08:52:18 UTC
God but the guy was hard to ignore even when you wanted to. This really speaks of... Well, them, when first meeting, like no matter how annoying and arrogant or just obnoxious Tuti could seem on the surface at first meeting (like some sorrof sense of proving himself and being on theoffense to do just that), but given time (or more when being forced to work together), there is more than just surface value to Tuti that Takashi discovers, something worth getting to know, somehing worth having in his life, something he can learn from and grow with. Yeah, this is the essence of them ( ... )

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tonomurajiro February 15 2010, 09:08:27 UTC
MORE!!! This can't stop here, dammit!! XDDD

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viherkyn February 15 2010, 11:10:40 UTC
This is definitely interesting! :D And naturally I love all the familiar names.

It would be interesting to see how the relationship between student!Tsuchiya and coach!Nagayama evolves. Tsuchiya seems friendly enough but I have a feeling Nagayama won't let himself be swept off his feet so easily.

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anonymous February 15 2010, 13:11:38 UTC
Not only am I thrilled that you picked my prompt to use, but I absolutely loved this and I want to see more! This universe has so much potential, especially with all of the situations that Tuti and Nagayama-sensei are going to find themselves forced into together merely by happenstance of their roles (buchou and not!coach). I'd love to see something taking place a few months from their first meeting, when Takashi has better footing with the position and he's come to know Tuti and all of his quirks and ways to push his buttons right back a lot better. They could have some of that awesome banter and chemistry going on after all that time, understanding each other's sense of humor (Tuti no longer things Nagayama-sensei has a stick up his ass, Takashi still thinks Tuti is loud and over-compensating but he makes him laugh), and it's morphed beyond just a simple teacher-student relationship. Maybe even the first stirrings of romance can be hinted at? Even if it doesn't get written, I'm still going to be playing this out in my head ( ... )

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analineblue February 16 2010, 14:12:25 UTC
Oh god this is so good. *__* I really, really hope you're planning to continue? XD

I wasn't sure how this whole thing would work, with Tuti being the student and all, but it's kind of perfect. The parallels with Tenimyu and Tuti taking Nagayan under his wing, and all? XD

And god, Nagayan is so cute. *__* Being sensitive about his height and of course wanting to do everything right, but not knowing how, and... Yeah. I totally, totally want more of this. *__*

Randomly, I kind of love that Nagayan can't be half-assed about anything, you know? Even if he hates tennis, he's totally going to be at all the practices early and probably stay late, you know? ♥

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