Fifty-First Century Girl

[lokifan]

Title: Fifty-First Century Girl
Author: lokifan
Recipient: eruthros
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/pairings: Martha/Amy (background Martha/Mickey and Amy/Rory)
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~2500
Warnings: Semi-open relationships
Disclaimer: The boys and girls belong to the BBC, even though I’m often much nicer to them than they are.
Summary: Amy is a twenty-first

Comments

[swan_secrets]

This is fucking amazing, pure hot hot sex. Loved the characterisations, the erotica, very very good.

[lokifan]

Wow! Thank you so, so much - and sorry for the late reply.

[cantarina1]

The Doctor had never yet been ginger, after all, and he generally had better manners than to leap from the TARDIS, clamp a hand about her wrist, and pull her in.
Totally fair observation *g* Great start to the story!

“Like when River says ‘spoilers’, except his voice is less sexy.”
“Amy!” Rory said. Amy gave him a Look and he shrugged, grinning ruefully. “Okay, I suppose her voice is sort of sexy. Unlike the Doctor’s.”
Eee :DDD You're captured their dynamic perfectly.

And her vivaciousness rather reminded Martha of Jack when he was happy.
I pity the poor universe that has to deal with the combined powers of Jack and Amy.

As did Amy’s cocked eyebrow and cocked hip as she slid off the railing again, her body rather close to Martha’s. Martha felt her body shifting in response, mirroring Amy’s.
Lovely imagery! And it's Amy's body language, bang on.

I really loved thoughts on the Doctor's matchmaking skills and the way Rory and Amy reach out to each other all through the first part!

[lokifan]

Thank you *so* much for the lovely, detailed comment :DDD And LOL, yes, I sort of want early!Jack and Amy to meet, and yet I fear that would be an end-of-season finale all by itself :)

it's Amy's body language, bang on.

*\o/* I've never written Amy before, so this was just the best compliment ever :D