drabblethon!

Dec 22, 2011 16:18

Okay, it's time to start our Drabblethon! The rules are fairly simple:

- Select a prompt, write a drabble for it, and post your drabble as a comment to this post.

- And here's where I'd usually write Use the subject line to title your drabble except, haha, THERE ARE NO SUBJECT LINES ANYMORE. So just stick the title of your drabble at the top of ( Read more... )

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Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG hamimifk December 25 2011, 17:33:06 UTC
A million stars dance above your head but you don't even notice them do you? You leap high in the air, graceful. Back straight as you twirl, leaving circles in the sand beneath your feet. So much a dancer, yet I doubt even you realize it.

Penelo

I whisper your name into the wind and pray that it carries to your ears. I think it impossible for a simple breeze to catch you offguard. The stars twinkle high above you as you stretch your hands toward them. Are you trying to capture them in your tiny palms? In palms that heal my wounds as well as they ignite fire across my flesh.

Penelo

I call your name louder. Watching you causes my body to ache. My long limbs tingle with want of your touch. My lips feel naked without yours pressed against them. Blue eyes twinkle like stars at me, causing my heart to race and my mouth to go dry. It pains me to draw you away from your beautiful dancing, but it's that same dancing that arouses my senses and makes me crave you with a fiery passion.

FranYou call my name and I close my eyes as need rapidly ( ... )

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG demoka December 26 2011, 01:22:46 UTC
Oooh. Good job! Don't get to see much of this pairing. Loved the ending. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG hamimifk December 26 2011, 16:05:56 UTC
Thank you! This is my favorite pairing so I try to write them whenever I can. =3 And you're welcome.

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG ryu19 December 26 2011, 06:19:34 UTC
I love the pure feeling you evoke in this piece.

Looking forward to more of you wonderful writing in the future hammy!

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG hamimifk December 26 2011, 16:09:25 UTC
Call me a hopeless romantic but it's pretty much how I always picture this couple. Pure and beautiful. I just finally figured how to get into words. =)

=D Woo! Thanks Ryu!

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG ryu19 December 26 2011, 16:35:41 UTC
Well you certainly have it down now.

Of course then there's the whole issue of Fran's age compared to Penelo's and the real possibility of Fran outliving Penelo.

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG hamimifk December 26 2011, 16:49:21 UTC
Well I've never claimed them to be a HEA (happily ever after) couple. There has to be some fallacy to the couple or they might actually be absolutely perfect (which just isn't realistic or fun, heh).

But then again, this is the world of Ivalice. Where you can bring a zombie back to life if you know the right witch (as witnessed in FFTactics A2). So while Fran will certainly outlive Penelo, there are ways they could extend Penelo's life for a time.

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG ryu19 December 26 2011, 16:51:49 UTC
Great, now I have an image of zombie Penelo gnawing on Fran's bunny brains.

And I'm not at all familiar with Tactics Advance or 2, which is why I haven't written your request on the ffyuri prompathon regarding characters from those series.

HEA...I need to start using that in general conversation.

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG hamimifk December 26 2011, 17:05:32 UTC
^^; It's zombie apocalypse FFXII style. xD

Oh, the Tactics games are great. Though Tactics A2 ties in more to FFXII as you see somewhat older, and definitely more mature, versions of Penelo and Vaan in it. Though if you want more Penelo and Fran time, then you'd have to play FFXII: Revenant Wings.

... Er, but yeah, I completely digress. In Tactics A2, there's a zombie that's wandering about. You have a chance to basically trick it into killing itself, but if you choose to help, it turns out to be this chick, Romilda (or something like that, I can't remember her name off the top of my head) who joins up with your gang. One of my favorite minor characters of the Ivalice Alliance.

=D And yes, HEA should be used more often. Try using it in reference to movies or couples, tends to work out best that way.

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Re: Taste of Stars | Final Fantasy XII, Fran/Penelo, dancing beneath the stars | 275 words, PG ryu19 December 26 2011, 17:07:51 UTC
That sounds cool about the zombie party member. In Xenogears you get a fluffy pink creature named Chu Chu that is later crucified along with the rest of the parties giant robots.

If there was a zombie apocalypse in FFXII, Vaan and his odd abs would be the first to go.

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