Comments | femslash100: "Scars" - Desperate Housewives

aeonian in femslash100

"Scars" - Desperate Housewives

Oct 10, 2005 14:53

200 words from this definition: a mark indicating a former attachment, as of a leaf to a stem. Follows "Excuses," "August," "In Pursuit of Punishment," and "Work." Also posted at bree_lynette.

Title: Scars
Author: Nia
Rating: PG-13
Show: Desperate Housewives
Pairing: Lynette/Bree
Summary: "These things to hold her place, now, things to witness what she is ( Read more... )

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projectcyborg October 12 2005, 04:43:01 UTC

ah, yes. this is very elegant, the symmetry of it. I'm in love with the image of them wanking in each others' beds. and oh, it hurts.

aeonian October 12 2005, 17:01:16 UTC

Thank you. I will have to post the next installment with a Kleenex coupon or something.

delgaserasca October 22 2005, 20:03:45 UTC

These things to hold her place, now, things to witness what she is missing.

Bit late to the party, I apologise. This line captures the tone of the whole piece; the writing is exquisite. I love it.

aeonian October 23 2005, 02:56:43 UTC

Thank you. :)

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aeonian December 5 2005, 19:04:36 UTC

You're very welcome.