Challenge 198: pretend - Avatar the Last Airbender (Azula/Katara)

[hamimifk]

Title - Someone Else
Author - Bat
Fandom - Avatar: The Last Airbender
Pairing - Azula/Katara
Prompt(s) - #198 - pretend
Rating - PG
Word count - 100
Summary - Sometimes Katara finds it easier if she pretends Azula is someone else. Written for lokuro  (as a first try at Azula/Katara).

Comments

[lokuro]

It may sound a bit strange, but I can't stand Katara in this drabble >_<” (don't mistake it for critic of your writing - it was really good to stir me up *g*) But I just have this feeling like she is a bit .. hypocritical here >_<” Ok, I might be a bit unfair myself ^^” In fact it's only naturally to fear the monster Azula really is .. but still~
Thanks a lot for the treat! *__*”

PS: just forgot to add - I really hope it wouldn't be your last try *g*

[hamimifk]

^^; That's okay, I understand. After re-reading this a few times myself, I see the flaws in it. Katara shouldn't appear so - meek/scared? Like I said though, this is my first try at them. I'm trying to feel out the characters in my head, but I see where I went somewhat wrong. I sort of think Katara would be a little afraid of Azula, though this drabble makes her more scare then she probably would be. :\ Ah well, not all first tries are successful. ^^;
^_^ Welcome!

Nope, it won't be my last try. >3 I've got a taste for blood now and I must pursue it! *bares fangs and lunges at the pairing* XDD