Comments | femslash100: Challenge 194: Game - Avatar: The Last Airbender (Katara/Toph)

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Challenge 194: Game - Avatar: The Last Airbender (Katara/Toph)

Jun 12, 2009 03:46

Title - How Long Before The Boys Catch Us
Author - Bat
Fandom - Avatar: The Last Airbender
Pairing - Katara/Toph
Prompt(s) - #194 - game
Rating - PG
Word count - 100
Summary - Katara's bored. Toph suggests a game for them to play.

( I'm bored. )

fandom: avatar the last airbender, challenge194, author: hamimifk

Comments 15

dearkiki June 12 2009, 08:16:05 UTC

Well, I don't know this fandom, but I think this is really good. I like the tension before the kiss... ;)

hamimifk June 12 2009, 08:43:11 UTC

^.^ Wow, thanks.
Just so you know - Toph is blind, hence the joke about playing a game of catch. She's an Earthbender (can control rocks and dirt), so even though she can't see, she can feel things through the ground (like people's actions, so long as they're in contact with the ground, that is). The 'boys' that are referred to are their friends Aang (the Avatar) and Sokka (Katara's brother). XD That's all you really need to know to fully understand this drabble.

dearkiki June 12 2009, 08:48:40 UTC

Oh, thank you. That helped a lot. :)

hamimifk June 12 2009, 09:02:31 UTC

^-^ No problem! lol If you're willing to read my stuff and don't understand something all you have do is ask. I have no problem explaining things. ^__^

codfisch June 12 2009, 10:56:19 UTC

Aw, cute! The voices are definitely in-character. It's very sweet. :)

hamimifk June 12 2009, 11:06:37 UTC

^-^ Thank you very much!

lokuro July 8 2009, 15:51:53 UTC

really like it! :)
Toph only wants to play, how sweet .. Just wondering why the last sentence makes it sound less sweet and more like a malicious irony? :D
perfectly IC! ^^

hamimifk July 9 2009, 07:01:12 UTC

lol, thanks.
Toph is so rarely sweet. XD You just know she's up to no good.
^__^ Thank you! I'm still an Avatar newbie (didn't have a cable when it was first on the air), so I'm always a little hesitant about writing Avatar stuff. XD A little reassurance that I haven't screwed now and then is always helpful.

lokuro July 10 2009, 23:23:06 UTC

Girls just want to have fun.. and Toph still has to make up for all the boring time at home :D Even so I find her really sweet... her own kind of sweet. The bitter spicy one XD
Well, then we are fellows ^.^ I just watched the last episode today.. yeah, I'm really-really new in Avatar fandom - the time it was on air I still thought animes-are-dumb (yeah, I know, epic-fail ^^") But I hope the fact I'm just another newbie doesn't devaluate my comment ^^"
Go ahead! I'm truly curious about your future stories! *_*"

hamimifk July 11 2009, 06:42:23 UTC

XD Yep. :3 Yeah, Toph's nicely bitterly sweet and spicy. XD
:D Oh cool, a fellow Avatar noob! *high fives* I saw the last episode a few weeks ago, but I only watched the first season and the first half of the second one, so I was like 'Wait what?', lol. Nah, a fan is a fan. ^-^ All comments are good and valuable.
<.< I actually have two Katara/Toph fics to do... So yeah, I'll have more. ^.^

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wolfdragongod October 13 2009, 10:48:34 UTC

cute