"In Pursuit of Punishment" - Desperate Housewives

Sep 08, 2005 02:31

200. Follows "Excuses" and "August." Also posted at bree_lynette.

Title: In Pursuit of Punishment
Author: Nia
Rating: PG
Show: Desperate Housewives
Pairing: Bree/Lynette
Summary: "There are easier ways to go to hell, but this one comes naturally to both of them."

In Pursuit of Punishment )

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warrior_cat September 8 2005, 07:16:31 UTC
Wow. Really lovely. O_O

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aeonian September 8 2005, 17:48:44 UTC
Thank you!

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sinful_caesar September 8 2005, 08:59:14 UTC
ohhhhhhh i love these so much...... lets just pretend this is what happened over the summer to bree and lynette!

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aeonian September 8 2005, 17:50:38 UTC
Haha. This would be the best "What I Did on My Summer Vacation" essay ever!

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giantessmess September 8 2005, 14:36:18 UTC
Awesome. You are the queen of drabble structure, I must say, tying all this together.

There are easier ways to go to hell, but this one comes naturally to both of them.

naturally, unnaturally. I love how it goes in that circle.
;)

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aeonian September 8 2005, 17:53:03 UTC
Thank you! The funny thing is, I totally hate writing drabbles.

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giantessmess September 8 2005, 22:50:22 UTC
That is funny, (is it a wordcount thing?). Drabble-writing fits my short attenion span ;)

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aeonian September 9 2005, 01:39:38 UTC
Yeah, it's the word count. The short-attention-span thing is nice, but I'm obsessive about getting to exactly 100 or 200 words, so it's a killer.

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projectcyborg September 8 2005, 15:45:43 UTC
ah, I think this is my favorite one (so far)! I love There are easier ways to go to hell and It is the only thing she does perfectly and Bree wonders if not even God can catch them and her deliberate mistakes. mmmmm, they are so naughty and full of aaaaaangst.

*smooches*

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aeonian September 8 2005, 17:56:16 UTC
Yay! I am obsessed with those deliberate mistakes right now...they will definitely be making a re-appearance.

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labellamafia494 September 9 2005, 04:11:19 UTC
Ooh, that was a gorgeous piece. Especially loved the deliberate mistakes!

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aeonian September 9 2005, 04:38:00 UTC
Thank you!

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