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[bast2]

Title Wet
Author Bast
Fandom Chicago
Pairing Velma/Roxie
Rating PG

I watch her dance--her body lithe as a leopard moving across the jungle of the cell block floor.

Comments

[ex_theatrica309]

Mmmm. I love it. Fantastic imagery there in the first sentence. Great work here.

[bast2]

thank you for the comment.

[heathers]

Another great piece. You've sure got your Chicago mojo workin.

This bit is my fav: "Lay off the chocolates", I say, and exit cold as a winter storm

-H

[bast2]

glad you liked it--even if you haven't seen the movie. (see it)!

[michellek]

I highly approve. :)

[bast2]

high praise, indeed! but personally, i don't think i've got roxie's voice in this one. i seem to do better when mama's in the story. i wonder why.....:)