challenge #102 - love

Feb 18, 2007 23:33

Title: Tenderness
Fandom: South of Nowhre
Pairing: Spencer/Ashley
Prompt: 102 - Love
Rating: G
Word Count: 100

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You're leaning in the doorway watching her. You do it a lot these days.

She's washing dishes - you should help her, but can't tear your eyes away.

Up to her elbows in foam and dirty water, to you she is angelic - face bathed in morning ( Read more... )

fandom: south of nowhere, author: little_lacuna, challenge102

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torak303 February 18 2007, 14:58:19 UTC
That was really sweet... and then I felt the stab at the end. You're a wonderful writer!!

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little_lacuna February 18 2007, 15:54:29 UTC
Thanks. Sorry, next time I'll try to omit the stab. :) I can be happy, I can!!

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alittlemorebite February 19 2007, 14:54:36 UTC
I don't know about everyone else, but I like the stab. Please, continue the stabbing. :)

You really know how to put a punch in a mere 100 words.

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little_lacuna February 19 2007, 15:43:21 UTC
Heh, something tells me I'll oblige you...

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adastranot February 18 2007, 15:35:47 UTC
You are on a roll with these drabbles..yay! I liked this one too, even though it was semi-hopeful. Alas, I cannot bury my secret romantic heart under too many layers of angst without it peeking out once in a while ;)

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little_lacuna February 18 2007, 15:50:25 UTC
Well apparantly nor can I...you know, to an extremely limited extent. ^ that's as good as it gets...

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suchaprettymess February 18 2007, 19:00:11 UTC
i love your drabbles Lizzy! they're beautiful and poetic, and just...awesome! keep 'em coming!

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little_lacuna February 19 2007, 00:55:47 UTC
heh, and this one kinda rhymes. Oops.

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