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ana_khouri in femslash100

Challenge #95 - temperance

Dec 15, 2006 00:42

So I kind of ran with it and came up with a triplet of Ivanova...

Title: Betrayal
Prompt: Challenge #95 - Temperance
Fandom: Babylon 5
Pairing: Ivanova/ Talia
Rating: PG
Word count: 131

We had a drink - not too much, just enough to calm our nerves - and it was smooth, soft and warm, like the conversation once the pin was gone.

When she took it off I ( Read more... )

author: ana_khouri, fandom: babylon 5, challenge95

Comments 6

sheepfairy December 15 2006, 07:19:25 UTC

These were lovely! I like how you deal with the tension between them, and then the sorrow that Ivanova feels afterward.

Although, nitpick - it is spelled 'Ivanova', not 'Ivonova'.

ana_khouri December 15 2006, 14:46:05 UTC

ag! so it is... thank you...my fingers think they know better sometimes... (I fixed it)

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked.

maekala December 15 2006, 18:43:51 UTC

I likes. You were definitely able to capture how I always envisioned Ivanova feeling.

ana_khouri December 16 2006, 05:43:20 UTC

Yay! Glad you think so... I hadn't written Ivanova/Talia stuff in a bit and I wasn't sure I had really pulled it off... So yay! and thank you!

kirylyn December 16 2006, 05:00:21 UTC

WOW!! very very nice

*whimpers* looks at stack of DVDs that need to be watched before I can think of REwatching stuff.....

but some eps are exceptions...

ana_khouri December 16 2006, 06:06:44 UTC

Thank you! : )

I'm going to have a stack of DVDs myself soon, thanks to my recently acquired Battlestar Galactica obsession...(gotta catch up on the early stuff...)but B5 (well, 90% of it..) is always worth the re-watch... Even eps I didn't remember loving remind me why I love the show...

Ok, that's enough B5 love for now, if I continue I'll be up for three hours watching my way to Divided Loyaties... : )

Thanks for the read!