Note: Artemis moved closer, but instead of the kiss Diana was expecting, the redhead turned toward her left breast. Their eyes locked as Artemis's mouth made its' slow descent, her hands moving sensuously down Diana's body.
Diana gasped, her eyes closing shut as she felt the warmth of the woman's mouth against her. Artemis's hands and lips were everywhere and Wonder Woman revelled in the heat and pleasure now coursing through her. A whispered, "Artemis" escaped from her as the redhead's mouth moved along her aching sex.
The above moves too fast. One second, Arti's aiming for a nipple (I take it), and the next she's going down on Diana. If you could slow it down -- possibly by starting the action a little further on, or something -- I think it would work better. :-)
The above moves too fast. One second, Arti's aiming for a nipple (I take it), and the next she's going down on Diana. If you could slow it down -- possibly by starting the action a little further on, or something -- I think it would work better. :-)
::chuckle:: yeah, i realize it went from zero to mach five in less than 2 seconds, but the word limit was 250. there was a lot more, but i had to cut it down. i may do an "extended version" and post it elsewhere, though. :)
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And also, yum. :)
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AMEN.
And also, yum. :)
::grin:: thanks!
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Artemis moved closer, but instead of the kiss Diana was expecting, the redhead turned toward her left breast. Their eyes locked as Artemis's mouth made its' slow descent, her hands moving sensuously down Diana's body.
Diana gasped, her eyes closing shut as she felt the warmth of the woman's mouth against her. Artemis's hands and lips were everywhere and Wonder Woman revelled in the heat and pleasure now coursing through her. A whispered, "Artemis" escaped from her as the redhead's mouth moved along her aching sex.
The above moves too fast. One second, Arti's aiming for a nipple (I take it), and the next she's going down on Diana. If you could slow it down -- possibly by starting the action a little further on, or something -- I think it would work better. :-)
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::chuckle:: yeah, i realize it went from zero to mach five in less than 2 seconds, but the word limit was 250. there was a lot more, but i had to cut it down. i may do an "extended version" and post it elsewhere, though. :)
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i agree. very much so. you'd think with all those amazons at her beck and call, she'd be getting much more "action". sadly, no.
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thanks!
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