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[restiva]

Prompt: #87 - Understanding
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Cho/Marietta, kinda
Rating: G
Word count: 150

Comments

[ilthit]

Oh, man, yes! That's clever. Nicely done!

A couple of minor typoes: red-rimmed and dark-haired are usually written with a hyphen. "To a woman so foul", you meant, and "slowly shifting". Minor points, of course, but I thought you might like to be told.

It really was a very nice ficlet. I like the interpretation. Who do you think the watcher was? Or does it matter?

[restiva]

Thank you :)

Typos fixed. Hehe. I swear speaking French is scratching away at my English.

I wrote the watcher as a random lady in one of the potraits - I figured she looked similar to Cho, which is why Marietta was drawn to her. Although rereading she sounds a bit more like a drifting ghost. Ho hum. Guess it doesn't matter terribly...

[ilthit]

I see! Yes, that makes sense. I keep forgetting that the paintings see and think too.