Comments | femslash100: More for Challenge 80. Woohoo... :-)

amazon_syren in femslash100

More for Challenge 80. Woohoo... :-)

Aug 25, 2006 13:56

Okay, I just saw that episode where the Checker's pub get's totalled by a litte old lady in a jaguar? The one where Hank got his wrist broken? That one.
And so, I present what happened after. :-)

Fandom: CSI (Las Vegas)
Pairing: Sara/Catherine, Sara/Hank
Challenge: 9 - Discovery
Word Count: 119
Rating: G? (Probably?)
Title: ( Change of Plans )

challenge3, challenge9, fandom: csi vegas, challenge16, author: amazon_syren, challenge80

Comments 8

selenay_x August 25 2006, 23:13:56 UTC

Nice. Dark, a little disturbing but very, very nice. How Does It Feel is my personal fave

amazon_syren August 26 2006, 01:06:36 UTC

Dark? Really?
How? :-)

Glad you like How It Feels. :-) (Why is it your favourite? :-)

obfan4ever August 26 2006, 05:24:05 UTC

Awesome, as usual.

I love how you intertwined the Hank storyline into these and extended the final scene from Crash and Burn.

amazon_syren August 26 2006, 11:28:54 UTC

Why thank you. :-) (Was 'Crash and Burn the title of the episode? I never know. :-)

I think that intertwining the whole Hank thing may actually have given me a bit of a jump-start to my own all-girl love-triangle plot. We'll see what happens. :-)

4ensicbones August 26 2006, 06:34:32 UTC

Part of me wants to walk into the morgue and tell her what happened. Tell her that I know what it’s like to have glass ground into your heart.
Tell her I know how it feels now.
But all I can picture her saying to that is, “Good.”
And she’d be justified.
She’d have the right.
That? Is just so fucking perfect, it makes me hurt.

And yay! I was watching that episode last night/whenever it was on and thinking "damn. I could use some fic for that..".

amazon_syren August 26 2006, 11:27:30 UTC

:-D

Damn, I could use some fic for that...

You're welcome. :-)

I was watching, and thinking "Damn, damn, damn! I do not want him to become a major character.
And then I found out about Elaine and my reaction was this:
A) Oh, Sara... You poor sweetheart, he's going to break your heart!
Coupled with:
B) Yes! Goodbye Hank! And I can so use this! :-)

That? Is just so fucking perfect, it makes me hurt.

Er. Thank you? :-)
Didn't mean to make you hurt, but I'm glad it's perfect. :-) (Or is this sort of like being a singer and making people cry? Cause if it's like that, then Woohoo! :-)

4ensicbones August 27 2006, 04:19:03 UTC

I was the same way. The look on Sara's face.. so heartbreaking.

I'm hurt in a good way. (And I just reread it, and it's still so. damn. good.)

amazon_syren August 27 2006, 18:31:57 UTC

:-)

I need to develope a plot-arc for the next bunch of story-lettes.