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Challenge 77 - Control

Jul 26, 2006 11:23

Title: Challenge 77 - Control
Author: gilleryFandom: Law and Order - SVU ( Read more... )

challenge77, author: gillery, fandom: law & order: svu

Comments 7

fresh_tart July 26 2006, 15:30:33 UTC

*thud* That was me, falling out of my chair. I will never understand how you (drabble writers) can capture something in 100 or fewer words that it takes me pages and pages to say! It's marvelous, and I worship y'all for it.

gillery July 26 2006, 15:32:39 UTC

*G* Thank you! I must admit this is only my second drabble or so, normally I am much wordier. I really do appreciate the feedback!

ilthit July 26 2006, 17:21:46 UTC

That is hot. :D Ahaha whee bondage. I do like that image.

One complaint, though: this is only 61 words long. It needs 39 more to be a drabble (the term is used loosely, but usually means a ficlet exactly 100 words long). I'm not sure what the community rules say about that...

gillery July 26 2006, 18:03:54 UTC

Well thank you for that, I should have read the fine print closer. I have corrected it to be exactly 100 words now, hopefully it has only improved with my editing.

ilthit July 26 2006, 18:41:03 UTC

Ooh, I like the new imagery!

gillery July 26 2006, 18:49:50 UTC

Thank you again.

bodhi_chenrezig July 27 2006, 13:39:57 UTC

Hot. Please make this into a full length fic...