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bella_farfalla in femslash100

#456 Gentle

Apr 28, 2015 22:56

Title: The First Time
Author: bella_farfalla
Prompt: #456 Gentle
Fandom: Once Upon A Time
Pairings: Emma/Regina
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 100

( If you were to be honest, you had expected the first time to be an explosion )

challenge456, fandom: once upon a time, author: bella_farfalla

Comments 10

write_x_always April 28 2015, 22:24:28 UTC

This is beautiful!

Great job :)

bella_farfalla April 29 2015, 21:23:52 UTC

Aww thank you. :)

swan_secrets April 29 2015, 07:07:20 UTC

Gorgeous writing, there's a lovely warm feeling through this, and that really adds to the last line. Excellent!

bella_farfalla April 29 2015, 21:24:43 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

4kennedy April 29 2015, 07:34:07 UTC

Oh yes, I would've expect an exlosion too, but this makes so much sense. Beautiful indeed. Well done.

bella_farfalla April 29 2015, 21:25:52 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

demoka April 29 2015, 08:24:59 UTC

This was certainly uplifting and angsty! Thanks for sharing! I keep on hoping for them to be endgame even though the writers will most likely just trample all over our hearts even more, but fics like yours keep me hopeful!

bella_farfalla April 29 2015, 21:27:33 UTC

Saaaaame I can't decide if it's just massive queer-baiting or if they really are endgame. It could go either way. But I so hope it's endgame! I love them so very much. Thanks for reading. :)

fresh_brainss May 4 2015, 01:15:13 UTC

Aw, such a lovely moment in such few words. <3

bella_farfalla May 5 2015, 22:15:18 UTC

Thank you :)