Wow, that was pretty intense ... I like your descriptions, how you build the atmosphere ... very creepy, but in a good way ^^ "The blood reaches the tip of her middle finger before dripping soundlessly onto her beige carpet, leaving a small, red, circular stain." Love that sentence.
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"The blood reaches the tip of her middle finger before dripping soundlessly onto her beige carpet, leaving a small, red, circular stain." Love that sentence.
Well done!
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