Constant Speed Test, by templemarker (Fast and Furious, Mia/Letty, NC17)

[templemarker]

Title: Constant Speed Test
Author: templemarker
Recipient: lilysaid
Fandom: Fast and Furious
Pairing: Mia/Letty
Rating: Oh so NC17.
Word count: 1k
Disclaimer: If it were mine the only way it would be more gay is graphic, graphic sex. Sadly, it remains not-mine.
Warnings: Rough sex and emo.
Summary: She was the only girl who got it, what it was like to want things the

Comments

[lilysaid]

oh, this is excellent. you did a great job of capturing Mia's loneliness, the atmosphere of the neighborhood, and the fact that both women are angry because they've basically both been put in the same situation. also, HOT. I totally believe Letty could get Mia (or anyone) off that quickly, just because she wants her to.

I was really hoping my author would pick up this pairing; thanks so much for writing for me!

[templemarker]

Oh man, I'm so pleased you like it! Seriously, this makes my day. :)

[trancer21]

Wow, that was *hot*. But, more than anything, I love the tone throughout it, the melancholy loss and ache of both women.

Dominic might have caused all the trouble, but Mia lost everything too, and if people are going to keep coming back without warning she's going to have to protect herself somehow.

I really, *really* liked this line. I could rant for ages on how Mia got hosed in the last movie, lol! But this just encapsulates everything, the hurt, the loss, the abandonment and how Mia's sort of expected to be there to pick up the pieces when they come back to lick their wounds.

[templemarker]

Thank you very much! I agree with you that Mia is treated really unwell as a character by the writers of the film--it's almost shocking, when you think of it outside the context of Dude Those Men Are So Hot, that she's just fucking left in this rather dangerous situation and expected to carry on when her support and protection is gone. Because of the shit that Dom did, that she couldn't control.

But anyway, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback.

[malexfaith]

I love how you got into Mia's head. Explained it so perfectly. Such an enjoyable read. Thanks heaps for sharing.

[templemarker]

Thank you very much for the comment! I'm so pleased you liked it.

[jessnick05]

Really great Mia voice; I feel for her loneliness and how she's stuck waiting and not knowing. Loved that she both wants to and hates to stay in her family's house, and the character of the surrounding neighborhood you built in to the story. And her simultaneous connection to and frustration with Letty is perfect. Loved this: Letty with a house full of brothers and Mia surrounded by them too. She was the only girl who got it, what it was like to want things the girls at school didn't care about but still want girl things too.

Also supremely hot! :)